1.
しんごうは traffic light is
きいろてんめつ flashing yellow
アクセルだ "accel pedal!"
2.
しゅくだいは (turning in)homework
しめきりまぢか on deadline
ギリギリだ the very last moment
3.
つぎこそは next time (finally)
ブロンドかのじょ BLOND girl friend
ゲットするぜ I will GET one!
1.
ReplyDeleteWhy do I use Katakana?
"accel" is an English loan word.
Effect of Katakana?
It is the most important verb in my senryu, so this katakana word brings bigger impact. In other words, when flashig yellow light (traffic signal), drivers should stop in common sense. However, most drivers accelarate their cars.
2.
Why do I use Katakana?
It is an Onomatopoeia
Effect of Katakana?
It emphasizes the feeling of "just on time". When one submits homework on time, he or she feels relieved. However, one cannot make it,...
3.
Why do I use Katakana?
Both are English loan words
Effect of Katakana?
They make my senryu funny. Whenever one has tried to make "Blond" girl friend, but he has failed. It implies his strong willingness.
I hope obba achieve obba's goal just like in senryu3 : )
ReplyDeletekk
I like the first one best!
I totally agree with the second one !!!
ReplyDeleteこの わたしの しゅだいは もう passed the deadline loool
すごいですね!
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